I want to go \'TOMORROW X TOGETHER\' concert.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to go \'TOMORROW X TOGETHER\' concert.
Because I\'m practicing this group\'s dancing in my club.
So if I have a chance to go idol\'s concert, I want to go their concert.
강사 첨삭
Ho Kara!
So if I have a chance to go idol\'s concert, I want to go their concert.
I have never been to a concert.
Many people enjoy concerts, I know it\'s fun, but the music is too loud.
I would end up having a headache that would kill the fun.
Andrea
I want to go \'TOMORROW X TOGETHER\' concert. Because I\'m practicing this group\'s dancing in my club.
>> I want to go \'TOMORROW X TOGETHER\' concert because I\'m practicing this group\'s dance in my club.
So if I have a chance to go idol\'s concert, I want to go their concert.
>> So if I have a chance to go idol\'s concert, I want to go to their concert.
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