I want to know how they can guess where heritage is
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I want to ask them how you can guess where heritage or jewel is. In the past, I read lots of comic books about archaeology. There was archaeologist, once he guess where heritage is, then he discovered heritage in the first time. I thought it is impossible. However, I thought there must be a way that they guess where heritage is. Though it isn\'t always exact, but it will be better than go for archaeology without any plans. So, I want to know their own way that they guess where the heritage is. I won\'t be disappointed when the way is very simple. And, I want to know the rate that can discover the heritage with the guess. I think the rate will be very low. That\'s why I think archaeology is hard and tiring. However, I can become rich man when I discovered some heritage that is very important and rich. But the successful people are few. I think it needs very big fortune, so I want to be just a common worker.
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I want to ask them how you can guess where heritage or jewel is.
>> I would ask them how they know where an architectural heritage or a jewel is.
In the past, I read lots of comic books about archaeology.
>> This is a good sentence.
There was archaeologist, once he guess where heritage is, then he discovered heritage in the first time.
>> There was an archaeologist who guessed where an architectural heritage was. Then he discovered it for the first time.
I thought it is impossible.
>> I thought it was impossible.
However, I thought there must be a way that they guess where heritage is.
>> However, I also thought there must be a way to guess where an architectural heritage is.
Though it isn\'t always exact, but it will be better than go for archaeology without any plans.
>> Though it isn\'t always exact, it is better than going to an archaeological site without any plans.
So, I want to know their own way that they guess where the heritage is.
>> Therefore, I would like to know their way of guessing where an architectural heritage is.
I won\'t be disappointed when the way is very simple.
>> I wouldn\'t be disappointed if it were simple.
And, I want to know the rate that can discover the heritage with the guess.
>> Moreover, I would like to know its success rate.
I think the rate will be very low.
>> I think the rate would be very low.
That\'s why I think archaeology is hard and tiring.
>> This is why I think archaeology is hard and tiring.
However, I can become rich man when I discovered some heritage that is very important and rich.
>> However, I could become a rich man if I discovered an architectural heritage.
But the successful people are few.
>> Unfortunately though, there are just few successful archeologists.
I think it needs very big fortune, so I want to be just a common worker.
>> I think being one needs a fortune, so I just want to be an ordinary employee.
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