I want to know how to be creative
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to ask to a magician how to imagine the principle of any magic. Since I\'m not creative, I can\'t imagine something new easily. I wonder how magician figure the new magic out. Frankly, the most important thing to imagine new magic is talent. However, I want to know where, when, and finally how to imagine something creative easily. If I know it, I can be a good composer and in my future, lots of people said creative people is necessary for AI. In conclusion, I want to know how to be creative easily, not for magic.
강사 첨삭
HI, Daniel! Thank
you for doing your homework! Please take note of the corrections.
- Teacher Debbie
>> I would ask the magician how he comes up with magic tricks.
Since I\'m not creative, I can\'t imagine something new easily.
>> This is a good sentence.
I wonder how magician figure the new magic out.
>> I wonder how a magician figures out a new magic trick.
Frankly, the most important thing to imagine new magic is talent.
>> I know the most important thing to create magic tricks is talent.
However, I want to know where, when, and finally how to imagine something creative easily.
>> However, I want to know where, when, and finally, how to imagine something creative easily.
If I know it, I can be a good composer and in my future, lots of people said creative people is necessary for AI.
>> If I know it, I can be a good composer. Moreover, people said creative individuals are necessary for AI.
In conclusion, I want to know how to be creative easily, not for magic.
>> In conclusion, I want to know how to be creative easily, not only for magic.
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