I want to know these sentences are grammatically correct!

2024-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

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I’m from class 4. Let me introduce my elements of character strengths and future career. My MBTI is ESFP. E represents extroversion which means I am outgoing person. I love to communicate with people and never feel too shy. S represents sensing which means I am practical person thinking based on my own experiences. F represents feeling which means I am emotional and consider relationships really important. P represents perceiving. I prefer to live flexible life. Based on these facts, I think teacher best suits me.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]a!

Thank you for sending this.
Below is my correction.

Andrea

I’m from class 4.
>> Correct

Let me introduce my elements of character strengths and future career.
>> Let me introduce the elements of my character strengths and future career.

My MBTI is ESFP.
>> Correct

E represents extroversion which means I am outgoing person.
>> E represents extroversion which means I am an outgoing person.

I love to communicate with people and never feel too shy.
>> Correct

S represents sensing which means I am practical person thinking based on my own experiences.
>> S denotes senses, which suggests I am a realistic person who thinks based on my own experiences.

F represents feeling which means I am emotional and consider relationships really important.
>> F signifies feeling, which means I am emotional and value relationships greatly.

P represents perceiving. I prefer to live flexible life.
>> P represents perceiving. I prefer to live a flexible life.

Based on these facts, I think teacher best suits me.
>> Based on these facts, I believe that being a teacher best suits me.

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