I want to learn a lot more english skills from you sharon.
학생이 쓴 원문
I missed english composition correction board.
Conversation with you sharon was very nice and good.
Remained class we shall share are not very much.
But I will steadily go on.
Help me as possible as you can.
Thanks for reading.
강사 첨삭
Hell Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your message below.
I also enjoy our conversations.
I hope we can work well together in the future classes.
Please take note of the suggestions below.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Conversation with you sharon was very nice and good.
>> Conversation with you, Sharon, was very nice and good.
Remained class we shall share are not very much.
>> We have a few remaining classes.
But I will steadily go on.
>> But I will make sure to keep my focus.
Help me as possible as you can.
>> Help me in the best way you can.
Thanks for reading.
>> Correct
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