I want to learn English

I want to learn English with three reasons. First, English is global language. If I am good at English, I can talk with every country's people and I can live globaly. Next reason is that my dream;diplomant and announcer ask for English, so I must learn English for achieve the dream. Finally, I am interested in foreign culture and their values. For example, I like their open minded, advanced view and party culture. In conclusion, I am happy when I study Englsih. PS : I am low on grammar and vocabulary.

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! This is such a surprise! I didn\'t expect this, but I\'m so happy to receive one from you. I had a great time with you yesterday. I hope we can talk more often. Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ I want to learn English with three reasons.>> I want to learn English because of three reasons. First, English is global language.>> First, English is a global language.  If I am good at English, I can talk with every country\'s people and I can live globaly.>> If I am good at English, I can talk with people from other countries and I can live globally.  Next reason is that my dream;diplomant and announcer ask for English, so I must learn English for achieve the dream.>> The next reason is that my dreams - to be a diplomat and TV news anchor - require English, so I must learn English to achieve my dream.  Finally, I am interested in foreign culture and their values.>> Correct For example, I like their open minded, advanced view and party culture.>> For example, I like their open mind, advanced view, and party culture.  In conclusion, I am happy when I study English.>> Correct PS : I am low on grammar and vocabulary. >> I am poor at grammar and vocabulary.