I want to learn English to…
학생이 쓴 원문
In fact, most people in Korea learn English to go to university. But I want to learn basic communication when I go abroad later. The English I learn at school is focused on grammar and accuracy, but the English I want to learn is to communicate in English without fear. I will learn English and have face-to-face conversations with people from other countries.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
In fact, most people in Korea learn English to go to university.
>>> CORRECT!
But I want to learn basic communication when I go abroad later.
>>> But I want to learn essential communication when I go abroad later.
The English I learn at school is focused on grammar and accuracy, but the English I want to learn is to communicate in English without fear.
>>> The English I learn at school is focused on grammar and accuracy, but the English I want to know is to communicate in English without fear.
I will learn English and have face-to-face conversations with people from other countries.
>>> CORRECT!
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