I want to learn English until retire my company.

2021-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Don

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name], I started learning English when I joined this company. but I already had started this when I worked for Bio-rad before 20 years. But I didn\'t know why I should do English study. but I know it now. Now, I can speak English with my boss and my senior manager without problem. begin of last year, I was worried that my English would be wrong. especially, grammar and proposition. but I speak English without worry, because if I make a mistake, I speak it again. Now I have a confidence to speak English. I have to learn more new words and idiom.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing this one. See you in a bit in our class.

T. DON

Dear [Name],

I started learning English when I joined this company. but I already had started this when I worked for Bio-rad before 20 years.

>> I started learning English when I joined this company. but I already had started this when I worked for Bio-rad before, 20 years ago.

But I didn\'t know why I should do English study. but I know it now.

>> But I didn\'t know why should I study English. But I know it now or But i now I know it.

Now, I can speak English with my boss and my senior manager without problem. begin of last year, I was worried that my English would be wrong. especially, grammar and proposition. but I speak English without worry, because if I make a mistake, I speak it again.

>> Now, I can speak English with my boss and my senior manager without a problem. At the beginning of last year, I was worried that my English would be wrong, especially grammar and proposition But I speak English without any worry, because if I make a mistake, I will speak it again.

Now I have a confidence to speak English. I have to learn more new words and idiom.

>> Now I have the confidence to speak English. I have to learn more new words and idioms.

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