I want to learn languages skill.
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Hi Da [이름],
Starting learning a new skill is one of the most practical ways to use your spare time in today\'s world. Those who are eager to learn something new every day, whether it\'s about another culture or a second language, are the ones who consistently achieve success. Learning a second language opens up the opportunity for being part of a community with a different culture, and to learn more about the world around us. See you later in our class. ^^
~Teacher Cathy
I\'m really want to learn language skills.
>>I really want to learn language skills.
Because i love talking each other.
>>Because I love talking with other people.
I like learn language and I want go to the different countries.
>>I like learning languages and I want to go to different countries.
I want make another countries friends.
>>I want to make friends with other nationalities.
I hope if i make friends, I want to speak well their language.
>>When I make friends, I want to speak their language well.
So If I could learn one new personal skill, I’ll learn language skills.
>>CORRECT
OR>>So, If I could learn a new skill, I\'ll learn language skills.
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