I want to live the eagle next my life if I will have.
학생이 쓴 원문
if I have a chance to reborn. I would want to live the eagle
I think that a eagle how much they are happy cause they can be able to go anywhere that they want
and none of birds can attack a eagle. they are king in the sky.
so if I get a chance to have life again after I died
I wish I were born the eagle which is very big and strong
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Very nice answer!
I also want to be a bird it would be so fun!
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if I have a chance to reborn I would want to live the eagle.
>>If I have a chance to be reborn, I want to be an eagle.
>>I think about eagles and how happy they are cause they can be able to go anywhere they want to go to and no birds can attack an eagle.
they are king in the sky.
>>They are the kings of the sky.
so if I get a chance to have life again after I died I wish I were born the eagle which is very big and strong.
>>So, if I get a chance to have another life , I wish I will be born as a strong and big eagle.
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