I want to live without competitions.
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you enjoy competitions?
Definitely not at all.
Even though I know that competitions is good for improving myself, I don\'t like it.
But during the life competitions always follow person. If I want to get more salary I should have competitiveness compared with others.
And there is no choice for each person about competitions. I can\'t avoid competitions for all of life. So it is worst..... I want to live without competitions.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir JY! You\'re right, competition is a part of life. We just have to live with it.
- T. Beth
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Definitely not at all.>>> Definitely, not.
>>> OR: Not at all.
Even though I know that competitions is good for improving myself, I don\'t like it.
Even though I know that competitions is good for improving myself, I don\'t like it.
>>> correct
But during the life competitions always follow person.
But during the life competitions always follow person.
>>> OR: But in life, competition is always present.
If I want to get more salary I should have competitiveness compared with others.
>>> OR: If I want a higher salary, I should be more competitive than others.
And there is no choice for each person about competitions.
And there is no choice for each person about competitions.
>>> And there is no choice for each person but to be in a competition.
I can\'t avoid competitions for all of life.
>>> OR: I can\'t avoid competitions for the rest of my life.
So it is worst..... I want to live without competitions.
>>> That makes it worse. I want to live without competitions.
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