I want to make a person\'s situation better with my .... ㅠ.ㅠ

2020-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

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I want to make a person\'s better with my friend Joon-Seob Yoon ㅠ.ㅠ It\'s because Joon-Seob Yoon is my best friend but Joon-Seob Yoon went to another school...... I like him.....ㅠ.ㅠ but the END! HAHAHA THE END! [ mimicry PD na. Do you know him?]

강사 첨삭

Why did he move to another school? I hope you see him soon. 

I want to make a person\'s better with my friend Joon-Seob Yoon ㅠ.ㅠ
>> I want to make things better with my friend Joon-Seob Yoon.

It\'s because Joon-Seob Yoon is my best friend but Joon-Seob Yoon went to another school......
>> It\'s because Joon-Seob Yoon is my best friend, but he went to another school.

I like him.....ㅠ.ㅠ
>> I like him.

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