I want to protect the environment but I don\'t know how. What should I do?

2019-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Don’t worry. There are many things we can do for environment. Saving water and electricity can be a easy and simple contribution. When we don’t use water, we need to turn off the faucet and when we don’t use electric devices, then we should turn off them as well. We can also consider more about the reducing plastic trash. Plastic bags and straws are one of the most serious, nonreuseable waste. But it is easy to reduce, if we have some more small attentions. If you already do it in your life, you can montly donate some money to environmental groups.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Happy Thursday :)


T. Lainey <\",)))><



Don’t worry. There are many things we can do for environment.

>>> Don\'t worry. There are many things we can do for the environment.


Saving water and electricity can be a easy and simple contribution.

>>> Saving water and electricity can be an easy and simple contribution.


When we don’t use water, we need to turn off the faucet and when we don’t use electric devices, then we should turn off them as well.

>>> When we don\'t use water, we need to turn the faucet off, and when we don\'t use electric devices, then we should turn them off as well.


We can also consider more about the reducing plastic trash.

>>> We can also consider more about the reduction of plastic trash.


Plastic bags and straws are one of the most serious, nonreuseable waste.

>>> correct


 But it is easy to reduce, if we have some more small attentions.

>>> But we can reduce waste if we pay more attention to even the smallest things.


 If you already do it in your life, you can montly donate some money to environmental groups.

>>> If you are already doing it, you can also donate money to environmental groups.


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