I want to quit smoking.
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Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your advice, but actually it is not for me.
But I like your first advice....
I totally agree with you.^^
Thank you.
See you later [이름].^^
-T.Naomi^
Giving advice. Give at least 5 advice. I want to quit smoking. What should I do?
>>correct
first you should think about why do i need smoking ?
>>First, you should think about why do I need to smoke?
another you find different interesting insted of smoking.
or you can eat a chocarate or a rolly pop when you want to it.
>>Another one, you find different interesting activities instead of smoking or you can eat chocolate or a lolly pop when you want to do it.
If you can,t stand smoking you can use fake ciggarette.
>>If you can\'t stand smoking you can use fake cigarette.
also you should say to your friends or relationpeople who you want to quit smoking .
>>Also you should say to your friends or relatives to quit smoking .
They will help you that your purpose to quit smoking.
>>They will help you with your purpose to quit smoking.
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