I want to say to you.

2010-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I think you are matching with classic music. because your voice is always calm and sweet. I just want to say that. (It was that I passed thing in this morning) I am sipping a cup of coffee now and I feel happy mood. Anyway what will you do with your boyfriend at this christmas? I have not plan yet. I don't remember what I did last christmas. Some of my coworkers are going to see a musical or a concert so they are already booked for the performance. But for me, we are a couple of having go out with each other like your couple and we are not active couple. Somtimes I wish we'll be exited like new couple. uh...but actually I am appreciate that I am loved by my boyfreind. Too much greed is not good.^^

강사 첨삭

Hi J! Yes, you are right. You should not be wishing more because you are lucky enough that your boyfriend loves you so much. Maybe the reason why you don뭪 go out that much is that both of you are working and that you feel stressed with your jobs. It뭩 just normal. At least you still manage to be together. ^^ Enjoy your cup of coffee. I hope I could sit with you and chat over a cup of coffee. Maybe someday. Have a great weekend!!! Lei J I think you are matching with classic music. >>I think you match with classic music. >>I think classic music is a good match for you. because your voice is always calm and sweet. >>correct I just want to say that. >>correct (It was that I passed thing in this morning) >>that뭩 the thing that I was not able to say and passed instead. I am sipping a cup of coffee now and I feel a happy mood. >>correct Anyway what will you do with your boyfriend this christmas? >>correct I have not plan yet. >>I have no plans yet. >>I haven뭪 planned of it yet. I don't remember what I did last christmas. >>correct Some of my coworkers are going to see a musical or a concert so they are already booked for the performance. >>correct But for me, we are a couple of having go out with each other like your couple and we are not active couple. >>But for me, we are the kind of couple that go out together unlike other couples who are active. Somtimes I wish we'll be exited like new couple. >>Sometimes, I wish we could feel the excitement like that of a new couple uh...but actually I appreciate that I am loved by my boyfreind. >>correct Too much greed is not good.^^ >>correct

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