I want to see a Touching drama.
학생이 쓴 원문
Are you interested in historical dramas/ Why or why not?
I liked many historical dramas when i was young. But, these days i don\'t want to it.
Now, I like more a hilarious and touching drama thanA historical and complecated drama. Bccause, these days, I need many hapiness and fun.
Historical dramas like to learn many knowledge.
But, i always want to get a touching. and i like
Fun, hilarious and touching drama.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir Ko!
I liked many historical dramas when I was young.
>>> correct
But, these days i don\'t want to it.
>>> But these days, I don\'t want them.
>>> OR: But these days, I am not into them.
Now, I like more a hilarious and touching drama thanA historical and complecated drama.
Now, I like more a hilarious and touching drama thanA historical and complecated drama.
>>> Now, I like more hilarious and touching dramas than historical and complicated ones.
Bccause, these days, I need many hapiness and fun.
>>> Because these days, I need a lot of happiness and fun.
Historical dramas like to learn many knowledge.
Historical dramas like to learn many knowledge.
>>> Historical dramas is when I like to learn an abundance of knowledge.
But, i always want to get a touching. and i like Fun, hilarious and touching drama
But, i always want to get a touching. and i like Fun, hilarious and touching drama
>>> However, I always want to be moved and I like funny, hilarious and touching dramas.
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