I want to sleep with a cat :)

2024-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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http://nekostay.kr/html/index.html ∧∧∧This site is a unique accommodation where you can spend the night with a cat. After spending a fun day with the cats in this accommodation, I want to bake my favorite toast and have breakfast, go to a cafe by the sea and have a comfortable time, and take a walk while listening to the sound of the waves.

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름], 

Thanks for sharing the link! Spending a night at a place where you can be with cats sounds like a delightful and unique experience. Your plan for the next day, including breakfast and a calming seaside cafe visit, sounds equally lovely. By the way, I also have many cats and I really love animals. Keep up the good work! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

http://nekostay.kr/html/index.html 

∧∧∧This site is a unique accommodation where you can spend the night with a cat. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>This site offers a unique accommodation where you can spend the night with a cat. 

After spending a fun day with the cats in this accommodation, I want to bake my favorite toast and have breakfast, go to a cafe by the sea and have a comfortable time, and take a walk while listening to the sound of the waves. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>After enjoying a fun day with the cats at this accommodation, I\'d like to make my favorite toast for breakfast, visit a seaside cafe for a relaxing time, and take a leisurely walk while listening to the sound of the waves. 

 

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