I want to study abroad
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to study abroad.(If it is cheap to live.) I think it\'s a great chance. I will take two reasons why it\'s a great chance.
First, my English ability will improve. Because, in foreign country, I have to use English only.(I don\'t know about any foreign language, except English). Then my English ability will improve naturally.
Second, I\'ll have a special experience. For example, I can experience the culture of other country. Then I\'ll have wider sight of understanding other culture.
강사 첨삭
I want to study abroad.(If it is cheap to live.)
>> If it is cheap, I want to study abroad.
First, my English ability will improve.
Second, I\'ll have a special experience.
I think it\'s a great chance.
>> This is a good sentence.
I will take two reasons why it\'s a great chance.
>> I will cite two reasons why it\'s a great chance.
First, my English ability will improve.
>> First, my English skills will improve.
Because, in foreign country, I have to use English only.(I don\'t know about any foreign language, except English).
>> It is because I only have to use English when I\'m in a foreign country. I don\'t know any foreign language, except for English.
Then my English ability will improve naturally.
>> So my English skills will improve naturally.
Second, I\'ll have a special experience.
>> This is a good sentence.
For example, I can experience the culture of other country.
>> For example, I can experience the culture of other countries.
Then I\'ll have wider sight of understanding other culture.
>> Then I\'ll have a deeper understanding of other culture.
Great job, Daniel! Keep on doing your homework to improve your writing skills. You\'re doing great!
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