I want to try the sashimi, because of future(?)
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I want to try the sashimi that adults often eat at dinner. I can eat European food and other foods well, but I am strangely not good at eating seafood among Korean foods... So I want to get used to the sashimi that adults eating, and then I want to eat sea squirt and fish. First of all, there was an event that motivated me. Seafood is often served these days in school lunches, but the teacher said \"you have to eat seafood, all of them!\". So when I forcefully ate it, my head feel dizzy a little that day. Maybe that\'s why I\'ve been trying to eat seafood since then. I hope I can eat well in the future.
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Good day, Maria!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleI want to try the sashimi that adults often eat at dinner.
>> CORRECT!
I can eat European food and other foods well, but I am strangely not good at eating seafood among Korean foods...
>> CORRECT!
So I want to get used to the sashimi that adults eating, and then I want to eat sea squirt and fish.
>> So I want to get used to the sashimi that adults eat, and then I want to eat sea squirt and fish.
First of all, there was an event that motivated me.
>> CORRECT!
Seafood is often served these days in school lunches, but the teacher said \"you have to eat seafood, all of them!\".
>> CORRECT!
So when I forcefully ate it, my head feel dizzy a little that day.
>> So when I forcefully ate it, I felt a little dizzy that day.
Maybe that\'s why I\'ve been trying to eat seafood since then.
>> CORRECT!
I hope I can eat well in the future.
>> CORRECT!
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