I want to use the free talking book when I have lesson from you

2020-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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Dear [Name] I thought it was difficult to your homework subject today. So I give my opinion to you instead of a homework. We had a talking with free subject by phone. So I think talking subjects are the same everyday. So I like to use free talking book that you recommened. When I was beginning time, in advance I studied it that I should have a lesson. so when I talking to my teacher, I could prepare to my thinking what I want to talk. So, if we use the book, I think we can talk a various subjects. What do you think about my opinion?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! :)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.

Have a wonderful day. :)

- Tricia

I thought it was difficult to your homework subject today.

>> I thought the homework is difficult today.

So I give my opinion to you instead of a homework.

>> So I will give my opinion instead.

We had a talking with free subject by phone.

>> We had been doing free talking on phone.

So I think talking subjects are the same everyday.

>> So, I think we have the same topic every day.

So I like to use free talking book that you recommened.

>> So, I would like to use the book you recommended me.

When I was beginning time, in advance I studied it that I should have a lesson.

>> I will study and read the book in advance.

so when I talking to my teacher, I could prepare to my thinking what I want to talk.

>> So, I could be more prepared with our class.

So, if we use the book, I think we can talk a various subjects.

>> If we use the book, we can talk about various topics.

What do you think about my opinion?

>> CORRECT!

[ Hi [이름]! I agree with you, the book is really helpful for improving comprehension, sentence construction and grammar skills. ]

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