I want to visit everywhere that my foot could reach.
학생이 쓴 원문
Cause my hometown is located in rural area, there are aboudant of nature as forest, temple, and river.
They are very good to visit from my home but I must take cautions when I go there.
Because I don\'t know about it well enough to others do.
Now I have my own car and motor cycle but I am not yet used to it.
The place is worth a visit.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thanks again for doing your homework ^^
Great job!
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Cause my hometown is located in rural area, there are aboudant of nature as forest, temple, and river.
>> Since my hometown is located in rural area, it\'s abundant in nature like forests, temples and rivers.
>> Since my hometown is located in rural area, it\'s abundant in nature like forests, temples and rivers.
They are very good to visit from my home but I must take cautions when I go there.
>> They are very good to visit but I must be cautious when I go there.
>> They are very good to visit but I must be cautious when I go there.
Because I don\'t know about it well enough to others do.
>> It\'s because I don\'t know about it well enough like others do.
>> It\'s because I don\'t know about it well enough like others do.
Now I have my own car and motor cycle but I am not yet used to it.
>> Now, I have my own car and motorcycle but I am not yet used to it.
>> Now, I have my own car and motorcycle but I am not yet used to it.
The place is worth a visit.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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