I wanted to say~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
hi lei~~
I'm "J"
Do you remember?
last wednesday, I stuttered about the reason I changed my time scedule.
I used to arrive my work place 8 o'clock.
but sometime I need a lot of time to dress up.
then I'm in two minds.
'I have to go now.' vs 'It's okay After the english class."
That's why I changed it.
It's so simple.
But I don't know that Why I feel difficult.
Anyway I'll study hard.^^
I just ate pork cutlet for diner.
It is great that our company offer excellent meal at a cheap price.
Even the quality of our company's meals is better than that of my mother's.
And that contibuted my health. huhuhu
take care lei~~
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!! Good morning!!! There I had your name right this time. Haha ^^ you have here a very good composition. Most of your sentences are correct. But be very careful with your articles and conjunctions. How is the weather? Take care okay, because I heard that there were some regions that were greatly affected by the typhoon. See you later J.
Lei J
hi lei~~I'm "J"Do you remember?
>>correctlast wednesday, I stuttered about the reason why I changed my time schedule.>>correct
I used to arrive at my work place at around 8 o'clock. >>correct
but sometimes I need a lot of time to dress up.>>correct
then I'm in two minds.>>then I am having second thoughts
'I have to go now.' vs 'It's okay After the english class.">>correct
That's why I changed it.>>correctIt's so simple.
>>correctBut I don't know Why I feel difficult.>>correctAnyway I'll study hard.^^>>correctI just ate pork cutlet for diner.>>correct
It is great that our company offer excellent meal at a cheap price.>>correct
Even the quality of our company's meals is better than that of my mother's.>>correct
And that contibuted my health. huhuhu>>and that contributed to my health/weighttake care lei~~
>>correct
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