I wanted to say~~~

2010-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

hi lei~~ I'm "J" Do you remember? last wednesday, I stuttered about the reason I changed my time scedule. I used to arrive my work place 8 o'clock. but sometime I need a lot of time to dress up. then I'm in two minds. 'I have to go now.' vs 'It's okay After the english class." That's why I changed it. It's so simple. But I don't know that Why I feel difficult. Anyway I'll study hard.^^ I just ate pork cutlet for diner. It is great that our company offer excellent meal at a cheap price. Even the quality of our company's meals is better than that of my mother's. And that contibuted my health. huhuhu take care lei~~

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! Good morning!!! There I had your name right this time. Haha ^^ you have here a very good composition. Most of your sentences are correct. But be very careful with your articles and conjunctions. How is the weather? Take care okay, because I heard that there were some regions that were greatly affected by the typhoon. See you later J. Lei J   hi lei~~I'm "J"Do you remember? >>correctlast wednesday, I stuttered about the reason why I changed my time schedule.>>correct I used to arrive at my work place at around 8 o'clock. >>correct but sometimes I need a lot of time to dress up.>>correct then I'm in two minds.>>then I am having second thoughts 'I have to go now.' vs 'It's okay After the english class.">>correct That's why I changed it.>>correctIt's so simple. >>correctBut I don't know Why I feel difficult.>>correctAnyway I'll study hard.^^>>correctI just ate pork cutlet for diner.>>correct It is great that our company offer excellent meal at a cheap price.>>correct Even the quality of our company's meals is better than that of my mother's.>>correct And that contibuted my health. huhuhu>>and that contributed to my health/weighttake care lei~~ >>correct

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