I wants to play a game called Halligalli with my grandmother and grandfather.
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I wants to play a game called Halligalli with my grandmother and grandfather. To give a simple explanation of how to play Halligali, there is a fruit card with a bell and a fruit drawn in it. First, several people sit around the bell, take the same number of cards regardless of the card type, and take turns playing one card in front of the bell. If the same fruit is combined to make a \"5\", quickly ring the bell. The first to ring the bell takes all the cards in front of them. Inside this card is a cards with all the numbers \"5\" drawn on it. If the \"5\" card is an apple, there must be no apple cards around it (if there is an apple \"1\" next to an apple \"5\", the total number \"6\" because it will be). Check the details when you buy, this halligali game is probably good for preventing dementia for grandparents and grandparents. Because the way to prevent dementia is to keep using your brain.
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Hello Maria!
This sounds like a very good game to play! I think you can have this game on your special celebrations such as Chuseok or Solnal. Well, for me to better understand the mechanics, tomorrow in class, you have to demonstrate or explain further how this game works. I think it is very exciting since it involves a timer.
Thank you so much for this homework answer!
You did a very good job!
-T. Donna =)
I wants to play a game called Halligalli with my grandmother and grandfather.
>> I want to play a game called Halligalli with my grandmother and grandfather.
To give a simple explanation of how to play Halligali, there is a fruit card with a bell and a fruit drawn in it.
>> Correct!
First, several people sit around the bell, take the same number of cards regardless of the card type, and take turns playing one card in front of the bell.
>> Correct!
If the same fruit is combined to make a \"5\", quickly ring the bell.
>> Correct!
The first to ring the bell takes all the cards in front of them.
>> Correct!
Inside this card is a cards with all the numbers \"5\" drawn on it.
>> Inside this card is a card with all the number \"5\" drawn on it.
If the \"5\" card is an apple, there must be no apple cards around it (if there is an apple \"1\" next to an apple \"5\", the total number \"6\" because it will be).
>> Correct!
Check the details when you buy, this Halligali game is probably good for preventing dementia for grandparents and grandparents.
>> Correct!
Because the way to prevent dementia is to keep using your brain.
>> Correct!
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