I was angry when I leaved the before company.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Yesterday, I think, you didn\'t understand my talking exactly because of poor English.
After my colleague was promoted as a director, he sent me under my junior person. I wanted to kill him. but now I \'m doing well.
As I heard, he is now under pressure to resign. He concentrated on keeping his position. after leveing me, most of others also leaved the company. so there was no good persons besides him.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
After my colleague was promoted as a director, he sent me under my junior person. I wanted to kill him. but now I \'m doing well.
As I heard, he is now under pressure to resign. He concentrated on keeping his position. after leveing me, most of others also leaved the company. so there was no good persons besides him.
See you in our class!
T. DON
Dear [Name],
Yesterday, I think, you didn\'t understand my talking exactly because of poor English.
Yesterday, I think, you didn\'t understand my talking exactly because of poor English.
>> Yesterday, I think you didn\'t exactly understand what I\'m trying to tell you because of my poor English.
After my colleague was promoted as a director, he sent me under my junior person. I wanted to kill him. but now I \'m doing well.
>> After my colleague was promoted as a director, he sent me under my junior position. I wanted to kill him. but now I \'m doing well.
As I heard, he is now under pressure to resign. He concentrated on keeping his position. after leveing me, most of others also leaved the company. so there was no good persons besides him.
>> As I heard, he is now under pressure to resign. He concentrated on keeping his position. After I left, most of workers also left the company. so there was no other good workers around him.
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