I was born in.,
학생이 쓴 원문
I was born in 1989.
In 1989, I don't know what events had happened.
but, 1988 when 1 year before I born,Korea held the olympic.
So Many nations were participating this big event.
the Olympic gave korea many benefits.
Some times, I asked my father that
강사 첨삭
[이름]!
What a happy day! How is the weather in Korea?
I hope that the weather is good.
A lot of people are really interested in Olympics.Why do you think people always look forward to it?
Have a fun and memorable weekend. Take a lot of care.
Teacher Nina
I was born in 1989.
>> Correct!In 1989, I don\'t know what events had happened.
>> Correct!but, 1988 when 1 year before I born,Korea held the olympic.
>> But in 1988 a year before I was born, the Olympic was held in Korea.So Many nations were participating this big event.
>> A lot of nations participated in the big event.
>> OR: Many nations joined the big event. the Olympic gave korea many benefits.
>> Correct ( Capitalize: Korea ^^)
>> OR: Korea got a lot of benefits from the Olympics.>> OR: Korea benefited a lot from the Olympics. Some times, I asked my father that
>> ( Your sentence is not complete..) Discuss this in class.
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