I was born in.,

2014-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I was born in 1989. In 1989, I don't know what events had happened. but, 1988 when 1 year before I born,Korea held the olympic. So Many nations were participating this big event. the Olympic gave korea many benefits. Some times, I asked my father that

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[이름]! What a happy day! How is the weather in Korea? I hope that the weather is good. A lot of people are really interested in Olympics.Why do you think people always look forward to it? Have a fun and memorable weekend. Take a lot of care. Teacher Nina   I was born in 1989. >> Correct!In 1989, I don\'t know what events had happened. >> Correct!but, 1988 when 1 year before I born,Korea held the olympic. >> But in 1988 a year before I was born, the Olympic was held in Korea.So Many nations were participating this big event. >> A lot of nations participated in the big event. >> OR: Many nations joined the big event. the Olympic gave korea many benefits. >> Correct ( Capitalize: Korea ^^) >> OR: Korea got a lot of benefits from the Olympics.>> OR: Korea benefited a lot from the Olympics. Some times, I asked my father that >> ( Your sentence is not complete..) Discuss this in class.

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