I was born in Pusan, Republic of Korea.

2016-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Tell me something about your hometown. What do you like and dislike about it? The sentence below is my answer to my homework. My hometown is Pusan. I was born a Catholic church to Gammandong in Pusan. My mom tried to became a nun but she gave up it to meet my father. Pusan is famous marine city in Korean. I like swim the beach in Haeundae. Pusan has many prpblem traffic jam. I dislike drive in Pusan.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]! I didn\'t know that you were from Busan. I thought you were from Jinhae. I would love to visit that city someday. I\'ve heard so much about it. Thanks for doing your homework. Check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ The sentence below is my answer to my homework. >> CORRECT!My hometown is Pusan. >> CORRECT! I was born a Catholic church to Gammandong in Pusan. >> I was born in a Catholic church in Gammandong, Busan. My mom tried to became a nun but she gave up it to meet my father. >> My mom was supposed to become a nun, but she gave it up when she met my father.Pusan is famous marine city in Korean. >> Busan is a famous marine city in Korea. I like swim the beach in Haeundae. >> I like swimming at the beach in Haeundae.Pusan has many prpblem traffic jam. >> Busan has a serious traffic jam problem. I dislike drive in Pusan. >> I dislike driving in Busan. OR:>> That\'s why I dislike driving there.

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