I was born in Pusan, Republic of Korea.
학생이 쓴 원문
Tell me something about your hometown. What do you like and dislike about it?
The sentence below is my answer to my homework.
My hometown is Pusan. I was born a Catholic church to Gammandong in Pusan.
My mom tried to became a nun but she gave up it to meet my father.
Pusan is famous marine city in Korean. I like swim the beach in Haeundae.
Pusan has many prpblem traffic jam. I dislike drive in Pusan.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!
I didn\'t know that you were from Busan. I thought you were from Jinhae.
I would love to visit that city someday. I\'ve heard so much about it.
Thanks for doing your homework.
Check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
The sentence below is my answer to my homework.
>> CORRECT!My hometown is Pusan.
>> CORRECT!
I was born a Catholic church to Gammandong in Pusan. >> I was born in a Catholic church in Gammandong, Busan.
My mom tried to became a nun but she gave up it to meet my father.
>> My mom was supposed to become a nun, but she gave it up when she met my father.Pusan is famous marine city in Korean.
>> Busan is a famous marine city in Korea.
I like swim the beach in Haeundae.
>> I like swimming at the beach in Haeundae.Pusan has many prpblem traffic jam.
>> Busan has a serious traffic jam problem.
I dislike drive in Pusan.
>> I dislike driving in Busan.
OR:>> That\'s why I dislike driving there.
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