I was born in Seoul korea

2025-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

나는 한국 서울 도시에서 태어났다 현재는 인천에 살고 있다 인천에 더 오래 살았기 때문에 내 발음은 인천 어투에 가깝다 나는 영어를 잘 하고 싶다 그래서 회사를 그만 두게 되면 미국에 3개월 가려고 한다 2026년 2월쯤 계획하고 있다. I was born in Seoul Korea Currently, I live in Incheon My Korea speak fluent is closed Seoul speak I would like to get the good English So, if I leave a company , I will go to the United States for three months Maybe around in 2026 , February

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ji!

Thank you for your composition today.

Take note of the suggestions below.

If you have any questions, feel free to ask during the class.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I was born in Seoul Korea

>> I was born in Seoul, Korea.
Currently, I live in Incheon.

>> Correct
My Korea speak fluent is closed Seoul speak

>> I speak Korean fluently.
I would like to get the good English.

>> I would like to have good English speaking skills.
So, if I leave a company , I will go to the United States for three months

>> If I leave our company, I will go to the United States for three months.
Maybe around in 2026 , February

>> It\'s maybe around February of 2026.

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