I was busy today
학생이 쓴 원문
1) What's the opposite of more?
less
2) What's the opposite of alive?
dead
3) What's the opposite of loud?
quiet
4) What's the opposite of happy?
sad
5) What's the opposite of last?
first
I was busy today. and I am tired now.
Make it worse, I am hungry.
I skipped my dinner. because of my works, which seem like the fountain.
Job is come up continuously like water.
but I know that all my feeling will help me to overcome the more hardwork in somedays.
I accept my job as duty and I promise my self to do my best all things around me.
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear [이름]!
Happy Wednesday again! Kudos! I think the homework was a piece of cake for you. You got a perfect score! I am so happy that your vocabulary skills is really great! Keep it up! Learn more new words everyday. I hope that you will have enough rest tonight to gain a lot of energy for tomorrow. Eat some snacks because you are hungry. Stay focused because I know that you will be able to reach your goal someday. I know that you always do you best. Motivate yourself more and make the most of it everyday. You can do it! See you tomorrow! Good night! Sweet dreams!
Teacher Nina
1) What\'s the opposite of more?less
>> Correct! 2) What\'s the opposite of alive?dead
>> Correct! 3) What\'s the opposite of loud?quiet
>> Correct! 4) What\'s the opposite of happy?sad
>> Correct! 5) What\'s the opposite of last?first>> Correct! I was busy today. and I am tired now.
>> I was busy today so I feel tired.Make it worse, I am hungry.
>> Correct!I skipped my dinner. because of my works, which seem like the fountain.
>> I skipped my dinner because of my work, which seem like a fountain. (Be careful with your punctuation marks.^^)Job is come up continuously like water.
>> Did you mean: Tasks is coming continously like water.but I know that all my feeling will help me to overcome the more hardwork in somedays.
>> But I know that my feelings will help me to overcome harder tasks someday.I accept my job as duty and I promise my self to do my best all things around me.
>> I accepted my job as a duty and I promised myself to do my best in all of the things that I have to do.
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