I was frightened when I first saw the mouse in the classroom.

2019-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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And I am often frightened at being strucked something that I can\'t perceive when I got up at mid night when the world is dark. I like to stroll in the night when there is nobody because I enjoy the calmness of circumstances. And I am often frightened by circumstances that I have never known In this case I must specially take care of myself. I am not a man of weakness. I am strong enough to stand the frightfulness. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks for doing your homework!

I hope you are having a wonderful day!

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And I am often frightened at being strucked something that I can\'t perceive when I got up at mid night when the world is dark.
>> I am often frightened by being struck with something that I can\'t perceive at midnight.

I like to stroll in the night when there is nobody because I enjoy the calmness of circumstances.
>> I like to stroll at night when there is no one because I enjoy the calmness of circumstances.

And I am often frightened by circumstances that I have never known In this case I must specially take care of myself.
>> I am also often frightened by circumstances that I have never known. In this case, I must especially take care of myself.

I am not a man of weakness.
>> CORRECT

I am strong enough to stand the frightfulness.
>> CORRECT

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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