I was happy day

2020-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I was unlucky yesterday. I had a two plan. The first was to work in SKHynix and The second was to meet new customer of Samsung. The distance between two company was over 100 km. so I used my car. I left earlier than usual but I didn`t bring pass of SKHynix. I recevied a one day pass. I spent two hours. so I worked very busy. I started at 12 AM to samsung. but I knew wrong schedual. I was late. My customer waited half hours. we were unable to used meeting room.and we had no chair. so we went out outside. we told about new project. I was very sorry because of late and this situation. But fortunately I knew well technical of project. Maybe It was one or two person in Korea. I explained very well. My customers were satisfied. I started very unfortunate at morring. but I finished very fortunate at afternoon. I was happy day.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir John. Thank you fro this. Hopefully, the rest of this week will be fortunate.

- T. Beth
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I was unlucky yesterday.

>>> correct

I had a two plan.

>>> I had two plans.

The first was to work in SKHynix and The second was to meet new customer of Samsung.

>>> The first was to work in SKHynix and the second was to meet a new customer from Samsung.

The distance between two company was over 100 km.

>>> The distance between two companies was over 100 km.

so I used my car.

>>> correct
I left earlier than usual but I didn`t bring pass of SKHynix.

>>> I left earlier than usual but I didn`t bring my pass at SKHynix.

I recevied a one day pass.

>>> I received a one-day pass.

I spent two hours. so I worked very busy.

>>> I spent two hours for that so I had a busy time at work.

I started at 12 AM to samsung. but I knew wrong schedual.

>>> I started at 12 noon to Samsung, but I knew there was something wrong with my schedule.
I was late.

>>> correct

My customer waited half hours.

>>> My customer waited for half an hour.

we were unable to used meeting room.and we had no chair. so we went out outside.

>>> We were unable to use the meeting room and we had no chair so we went out outside.

we told about new project.

>>> We talked about the new project.

I was very sorry because of late and this situation.

>>> I was very sorry because of being late and this situation.
But fortunately I knew well technical of project.

>>> But fortunately, I knew well about the technicalities of the project.

Maybe It was one or two person in Korea.

>>> Maybe it was one or two persons in Korea.
I explained very well. My customers were satisfied.

>>> I explained it very well and my customer was satisfied.
I started very unfortunate at morring. but I finished very fortunate at afternoon.

>>> I started quite unfortunate in the morning but I ended the day very fortunate.

I was happy day.

>>> It was a happy day.

>>> OR: I was happy that day.

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