I was late.

2012-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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After a phone class, I sent a message to my girlfriend. "Good morning !" And I slept immediately. I didn't recognize it. When I opend my eyes, the hands of clock told me that you are already late. OMG! It was 9:09 am. I directly went to my laboratory without washing. Fortunately, there wasn't my senior in the laboratory. Because he was on a business. But I heard a sound like infernos. He had been in the lab. before I went. OMG again! I apolozied him in a messenger but I am still uncomfortable. I really want to do well here where I am working. But it can't handle in my mind. Hey me! Don't think about a negative thing. I have a power inside me to change from negative to positive. Let I think about positive things. I can do anything I set my mind to

강사 첨삭

OMG! That was a very funny story! ^^ I suppose you were quite tired to have fallen back to sleep without even noticing it. I hope your boss wasn\'t too angry. Enjoy your weekend! And try not to be late for work on Monday. ^^ T. Nica After a phone class, I sent a message to my girlfriend. >>After my phone class, I sent a message to my girlfriend.  \"Good morning !\" And I slept immediately. >>\"Good morning!\", and I slept immediately. >>\"Good morning!\", and I slept right away.  I didn\'t recognize it. >>Correct! >>I didn\'t notice it. When I opend my eyes, the hands of clock told me that you are already late. >>When I opened my eyes, I saw my clock and found out I was already late. >>When I opened my eyes, I saw my the time from my watch and found out that I was already late. OMG! It was 9:09 am. >>Correct!I directly went to my laboratory without washing. >>Correct!  Fortunately, there wasn\'t my senior in the laboratory. >>Fortunately, my senior wasn\'t in the laboratory.  Because he was on a business. >>Because he was on a business trip.  But I heard a sound like infernos. >>Correct! He had been in the lab. before I went. OMG again! >>He had been in the lab before I came in. OMG again! (There\'s no need to put a period after the word \'lab\')I apolozied him in a messenger but I am still uncomfortable. >>I apologized to him through the messenger but I\'m still uncomfortable. I really want to do well here where I am working. >>Correct! But it can\'t handle in my mind. >>But I couldn\'t help it. >>But my mind can\'t handle it.Hey me! Don\'t think about a negative thing. >>Hey me! Don\'t think about negative things. I have a power inside me to change from negative to positive. >>I have the power to change what\'s negative to positive. Let I think about positive things. >>I will think about positive things.I can do anything I set my mind to >>I can do anything I set my mind to. (Correct sentence just don\'t forget your punctuation. ^^)

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