I was late.
학생이 쓴 원문
After a phone class, I sent a message to my girlfriend. "Good morning !" And I slept immediately. I didn't recognize it. When I opend my eyes, the hands of clock told me that you are already late. OMG! It was 9:09 am.
I directly went to my laboratory without washing. Fortunately, there wasn't my senior in the laboratory. Because he was on a business. But I heard a sound like infernos. He had been in the lab. before I went. OMG again!
I apolozied him in a messenger but I am still uncomfortable. I really want to do well here where I am working. But it can't handle in my mind.
Hey me! Don't think about a negative thing. I have a power inside me to change from negative to positive. Let I think about positive things.
I can do anything I set my mind to
강사 첨삭
OMG! That was a very funny story! ^^ I suppose you were quite tired to have fallen back to sleep without even noticing it. I hope your boss wasn\'t too angry. Enjoy your weekend! And try not to be late for work on Monday. ^^
T. Nica
After a phone class, I sent a message to my girlfriend.
>>After my phone class, I sent a message to my girlfriend.
\"Good morning !\" And I slept immediately.
>>\"Good morning!\", and I slept immediately.
>>\"Good morning!\", and I slept right away.
I didn\'t recognize it.
>>Correct!
>>I didn\'t notice it.
When I opend my eyes, the hands of clock told me that you are already late.
>>When I opened my eyes, I saw my clock and found out I was already late.
>>When I opened my eyes, I saw my the time from my watch and found out that I was already late.
OMG! It was 9:09 am.
>>Correct!I directly went to my laboratory without washing.
>>Correct!
Fortunately, there wasn\'t my senior in the laboratory.
>>Fortunately, my senior wasn\'t in the laboratory.
Because he was on a business.
>>Because he was on a business trip.
But I heard a sound like infernos.
>>Correct!
He had been in the lab. before I went. OMG again!
>>He had been in the lab before I came in. OMG again! (There\'s no need to put a period after the word \'lab\')I apolozied him in a messenger but I am still uncomfortable.
>>I apologized to him through the messenger but I\'m still uncomfortable.
I really want to do well here where I am working.
>>Correct!
But it can\'t handle in my mind.
>>But I couldn\'t help it.
>>But my mind can\'t handle it.Hey me! Don\'t think about a negative thing.
>>Hey me! Don\'t think about negative things.
I have a power inside me to change from negative to positive.
>>I have the power to change what\'s negative to positive.
Let I think about positive things.
>>I will think about positive things.I can do anything I set my mind to
>>I can do anything I set my mind to. (Correct sentence just don\'t forget your punctuation. ^^)
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