I was on duty this tuesday

2013-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Q1 - I'm afraid I didn't ____ to finish it on time. manage Q2 - Losing your temper will ____ nothing, so calm down. achieve Q3 - I'm disorganised and find it hard to ____ my time well. manage Q4 - There's so much to do that I'm struggling to ____ with it all. cope Q5 - We didn't ____ to hit any of of targets. manage Q6 - Having ____ the qualification with the highest mark, she got promoted. coped Q7 - That was a real ____; well done. achievement Q8 - We only achieved about half the work. I was on duty this tuesday. It was boring. because there was nothing to do except, watching TV. I prepared books to read. But, I couldn't read it. It was enervation. I thought my life. My life is always the same like this, if I won't change my job. It means Im officer and my life is guaranteed by long work span. Sometimes, I ask to myself, It makes me happy? I can't confirm the answer.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름] ^_^ I really appreciate all of the things you do in class. You share a lot of stories, pose a lot of questions which makes me really happy. I really feel happy whenever you express yourself in class. Just keep on striving hard and of course don\'t forget to go over the corrections I gave you. Take it as a challenge and try not to commit those mistakes again. ^^ You  can do it! I am excited to talk to you again and hear your stories about Europe! Good night! See you!Teacher Nina   Q1 - I\'m afraid I didn\'t ____ to finish it on time.manage >> Correct! Q2 - Losing your temper will ____ nothing, so calm down.achieve >> Correct! Q3 - I\'m disorganised and find it hard to ____ my time well.manage >> Correct! Q4 - There\'s so much to do that I\'m struggling to ____ with it all.cope >> Correct! Q5 - We didn\'t ____ to hit any of of targets.manage >> Correct! Q6 - Having ____ the qualification with the highest mark, she got promoted.coped >> achieved Q7 - That was a real ____; well done.achievement >> Correct! Q8 - We only achieved about half the work.>> managedI was on duty this tuesday. >> I was on duty last Tuesday. It was boring. because there was nothing to do except, watching TV. >> Correct! >> OR: It was boring because there was nothing I can do but to watch TV. >> OR: I was bored because I just watched TV.I prepared books to read. >> I prepared some books for me to read.But, I couldn\'t read it. It was enervation. >> But I couldn\'t read it because it was enervative. >> OR: I wasn\'t able to read it because it makes me enervate.I thought my life. >> I thought about my life.My life is always the same like this, if I won\'t change my job. >> My life will always be the same if I won\'t change my job. >> OR: I will always have the same routine if I won\'t change my job.It means Im officer and my life is guaranteed by long work span. >> It means I\'m an officer and I will be working for a long span of time. >> OR: I\'m an officer and I\'m guaranteed to work for a long time.Sometimes, I ask to myself, It makes me happy? >> I sometimes ask myself, am I happy? >> OR: I sometimes ask myself, does my job make me happy? >> OR: I ask myself sometimes, am I happy with my job? I can\'t confirm the answer. >> I can\'t find the answer.

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