I was one who spent time alone. I just had some of a friend
학생이 쓴 원문
but they and I were really closed each other and you had a great time together... on a field in our village
and I feel like that that is better more having a friendship in a young age.
I regret not to get more hanging out with my friend..
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. It is nice to know you about your childhood friends. Maybe, you will see each other again in the future, we cannot really tell but I hope you do. Thank you for sharing once again. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I was one who spent time alone.
>> CORRECT =)
I just had some of a friend
but they and I were really closed each other and you had a great time together... on a field in our village
>> I just had a few friends and we were really close to each other and we had a great time together on a field in our village.
and I feel like that that is better more having a friendship in a young age.
>> And I feel that it is better to have friendships at a young age.
I regret not to get more hanging out with my friend..
>> I regret not hanging out more with my friend.
I was one who spent time alone.
>> CORRECT =)
I just had some of a friend
but they and I were really closed each other and you had a great time together... on a field in our village
>> I just had a few friends and we were really close to each other and we had a great time together on a field in our village.
and I feel like that that is better more having a friendship in a young age.
>> And I feel that it is better to have friendships at a young age.
I regret not to get more hanging out with my friend..
>> I regret not hanging out more with my friend.
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