I was sick

2020-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I was sick yesterday. I was fever. I had a SKHynix schedule. but People with fever was not allowed to enter SKHynix . so I didn`t go there. I was a house allday. I have been sick nowaday. I had a pain in my feet and then arm and then eye. I guess reason is my age. before about 3 years ago. I was health. I took exercise in fitness for two hours per day. and I walked about five kilometer per day. I didn`t take exercise from february because corona-19. Do you know \'전광훈\' pastor news. The news is similiar \'신천지\'. I think \'전광훈\' pastor is pseudo-religion. pseudo-religion must disappear in the world.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. I hope you are feeling better today. Good luck!

- T. Beth
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I was sick yesterday.

>>> correct

I was fever.

>>> I had a fever.

I had a SKHynix schedule. but People with fever was not allowed to enter SKHynix . so I didn`t go there.
>>> I had a schedule at SKHynix, but people with fever was not allowed to enter SKHynix so I didn`t go there.

I was a house allday.

>>> I was at home all day.
I have been sick nowaday.

>>> I have been sick these days.

I had a pain in my feet and then arm and then eye.
>>> I have pain in my feet, arms and eyes.
I guess reason is my age.

>>> I guess it\'s due to aging.
before about 3 years ago. I was health.

>>> About three years ago, I was completely healthy.

I took exercise in fitness for two hours per day.and I walked about five kilometer per day.
>>> I exercised in the gym for two hours every day and walked for about five kilometres per day.

I didn`t take exercise from february because corona-19.

>>> I didn\'t exercise since February because of CoVid-19.
Do you know \'전광훈\' pastor news.

>>> Do you know the news about pastor Jun Kwang Hoon?

The news is similiar \'신천지\'.
>>> The news is similar to Shinjeonji.
I think \'전광훈\' pastor is pseudo-religion.

>>> I think pastor Jun Kwang Hoon is from a pseudo-religious group.
pseudo-religion must disappear in the world.

>>> correct ( Pseudo-religion must disappear in the world. )

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