I was so busy

2013-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Hi I was going to submit my sentences to this page. But, Im not in my office. I leaved my offic one hour ago to have dinner. I forgot pressing the button to upload these sentences when I wan in my office. My mother owns hers business which offer some foods with chiken and beer. Sometimes I eat dinner there. I am also there. Im feeling much hungry. What is your main food? Our nations food is rice and Kimchi. Korean always eat anything woth Kimchi. Im wondering How you are old and where you were live. Actually, I don't know about those. I though of that student should know those at least as the student.

강사 첨삭

Hi Happy Monday! Thanyou for sending in your homework. I enjoyed reading your composition! :) Maybe we can share stories in out class tomorrow? Have a good night! -T.Aurora :) Hi I was going to submit my sentences to this page. >>Hi, I was about to submit my paragraph to this page. But, Im not in my office. >>But not in my office. I leaved my offic one hour ago to have dinner. >>I left my office an hour ago to have dinner. I forgot pressing the button to upload these sentences when I wan in my office.>>I forgot to clicking on the send button to upload my composition when I was in the office.My mother owns hers business which offer some foods with chiken and beer. >>My mother owns a business which offers some food with chicjen and beer. Sometimes I eat dinner there. >>CORRECT. I am also there. >>CORRECT Im feeling much hungry. >>CORRECT OR >> I\'m feeling hungry. What is your main food? >>CORRECT Our nations food is rice and Kimchi. >>CORRECT Korean always eat anything woth Kimchi.>>Koreans always eat anything with kimchi.Im wondering How you are old and where you were live. >>I\', wondering how old you are and where you\'re from. Actually, I don\'t know about those. >>CORRECT I though of that student should know those at least as the student. >>I thought, as a student, I should know atleat one thing about you.

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