I was stressed out

2013-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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These days [이름] guys of our company are very fluent in speaking english I had taken under my charge of overseas sales work a few years ago. generally, I have one or two meetings with my oversea's customer, such as Denmark,Chille,China,Jjapan and America. In case of technical part,I can easily understand the conversation. but I can't express my consideration and opnion. I was very stressed out by it. so, I started study english early this year for my job. I feel, hearing is more and more getting better. but,speaking is pretty hard,really difficult for me. no matter how hard I study speaking english, I can't improve my english ability. so I knocked your side last week.I am glad to meet you,kelly teacher. I guess and hope that (You & me) We seemed to be good harmony for each other. Is there any way to expedite it? please help me kindly and let me know the way.

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! I really appreciate every word you wrote in here. It gave an inspiration to do my job better. I\'ll do my best to help you in any way I can. Just keep the passion burning. Have a great day!

~t. KELLY~

These days [이름] guys of our company are very fluent in speaking english

>> These days [이름] guys in our company are very fluent in speaking English.

>> These days [이름] in our our company are very fluent in speaking English.

I had taken under my charge of overseas sales work a few years ago.

>>  I had taken under my charge overseas sales work a few years ago.

generally, I have one or two meetings with my oversea\'s customer, such as Denmark,Chille,China,Jjapan and America.

>> Generally, I have one or two meetings with my overseas customers, such as Denmark,Chile,China,Japan and America.

In case of technical part,I can easily understand the conversation.

>> Correct.

but I can\'t express my consideration and opnion.

>> but I can\'t express my ideas and opinion.

I was very stressed out by it.

>> Correct.

so, I started study english early this year for my job.

>>So, I started studying English early this year for my job.

I feel, hearing is more and more getting better. but,speaking is pretty hard,really difficult for me.

>> I feel that my listening skill is getting better but speaking is pretty hard and difficult for me.

no matter how hard I study speaking english, I can\'t improve my english ability.

>> No matter how hard I study and speak English I can\'t improve my English ability.

so I knocked your side last week.

>> Correct.

>> OR: So I knocked you last week.

I am glad to meet you,kelly teacher.

>> I\'m glad to meet you teacher Kelly.

I guess and hope that (You & me) We seemed to be good harmony for each other.

>>  I guess and hope that (You & me) will continue to be in good harmony for each other.

Is there any way to expedite it?

>> Correct.

please help me kindly and let me know the way.

>> Correct.

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