I watch movie in the cinema.
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I watch movie in the cinema.
Because cinema is very big.
But TV is small. I like watching the movie and popcron.
But at home i can\'t eat popcron.
I am sometimes watching the movie in the home.
I like watch movie in the cinema.
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I watch movie in the cinema.
Because cinema is very big.
But TV is small.
>> I prefer to watch a movie at the cinema because it\'s it has a very big screen but the TV is small.
I like watching the movie and popcron.
>> I like eating popcorn while watching movies.
But at home i can\'t eat popcron.
>> But I can\'t do that at home.
I am sometimes watching the movie in the home. I like watch movie in the cinema.
>> I sometimes watch movies at home, however, I still prefer to go to the movie theatre.
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