I went an an amusement park.

Today,I went an amusement park. Its name was the Children's Grand Park. I went there when I was forth grade. It was an interesting place like Lotte World. When I arrived there, first,I had gimbab and chicken. Next, I rode the rides. I rode the rides for two hours. I had some snack at 3:00. Since then,I met my friend,Seoyoung. I took three pictures with her. Then,I came my home at 7:00. I think my home is the best place. Today was great day.

Hi there! Thank you for sharing the things that happened in your life. Treasure those memories because those are the things that make our life as sweet as an apple=) Thank you so much! T.Jane. Today,I went an amusement park. >>Today, I went to an amusement park.Its name was the Children\'s Grand Park. >>Its name is Children\'s Amusement Park.I went there when I was forth grade. >>The last time that I went there was when I was in fourth grade.It was an interesting place like Lotte World. >>Correct.When I arrived there, first,I had gimbab and chicken. >>Correct.Next, I rode the rides. >>Correct.I rode the rides for two hours. >>Correct.I had some snack at 3:00. >>Correct.Since then, I met my friend, Seoyoung. >>Correct.I took three pictures with her. >>Correct.Then, I came my home at 7:00. >>Then I came back home at 7:00 pm.I think my home is the best place. >>Correct.Today was great day. >>Today was a great day.