I went for lefting to In-jae in Gyeong-gi-do.

I experienced lefting last weekend. This is totally first experience for me. The lefting is sports that is taking the boat by paddle through down along the valley. We took boat, 10 peoples. We had to strongly paddle in the rapid stream. When we went through the rapid stream, we creased tension and interested more. Just in time, we saw a capsizing boat and some peoples fall into water. So we paddled with us strength more than before.

Hello Susan!

I뭢 not sure that it is called lefting. I think it is rafting. I am happy that you enjoyed your weekend! I hope you could send me pictures of your trip. ^^ See you in class.

T.Faye

Here are your corrections:

I experienced lefting last weekend.
>>Correct!

>>[Or is it rafting because I believe it is rafting]
This is totally first experience for me.
>>This is totally my first experience.
The lefting is sports that is taking the boat by paddle through down along the valley.
>>Rafting is a sport that we ride on a boat and paddle down through the valley.
We took boat, 10 peoples.
>>We took a boat that holds 10 people.
We had to strongly paddle in the rapid stream.
>>Correct!
When we went through the rapid stream, we creased tension and interested more.
>>When we went through the rapid stream, our tension increased and we were interested in more.
Just in time, we saw a capsizing boat and some peoples fall into water.
>>Just in time, we saw a capsizing boat and people fell in the water.
So we paddled with us strength more than before.

>>So we paddled stronger than before.