I went KFC.

2012-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I went KFC yesterday. Because my younger sister and I wanted to go there. We ate two chicken burgers and some fried chickens. Also,I got two mugs because I won the game. When I got into there,I was too hungry to eat all food. So,I ate them very fast. They were very delicious. I want to go KFC again next time.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! Whoa! I bet you were so hungry before you went to KFC! You ate too much. I also enjoy eating foods in KFC. I love their double-down chicken sandwich! Well, I hope you had a happy weekend. I\'ll see you in class later. Take care! T. JanE ^^ I went KFC yesterday. Because my younger sister and I wanted to go there. >> I went to KFC yesterday with my younger sister because we wanted to go there.We ate two chicken burgers and some fried chickens.>> Correct Also, I got two mugs because I won the game. >> Correct >> Also, I won two mugs in the raffle.When I got into there, I was too hungry to eat all food. >> When I got there, I was too hungry that I could eat all the foods.So, I ate them very fast. >> Correct They were very delicious. >> Correct I want to go KFC again next time. >> I want to go to KFC again next time.

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