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2010-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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For example, we have to analyse our score because some schools consider standard deviation or others care only percentile. Second, the parts every school reflects is different. So, it is more beneficial to apply for the school which reflects subjects we did well on the test. Some also give extra point on specific subjects so we definately need to check out which schools are most adventageous. This entrance system is very complicated so there are a lot of things to consider to figure out which is good for us. I'm kind of sad about this situation. The view of education in Korean society don't care about students' interest. They are just trying to go to a few good schools.

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Here is the continuation ....  For example, we have to analyse our score because some schools consider standard deviation or others care only percentile.  >>For example, we have to analyse our score because some schools consider the standard deviation while others only care about percentile.  Second, the parts every school reflects is different. >>Second, the part every school reflects is different. So, it is more beneficial to apply for the school which reflects subjects we did well on the test.  >>So, it is more beneficial to apply for the school which reflects the subjects we did well on the test.  Some also give extra point on specific subjects so we definately need to check out which schools are most adventageous.  >>Some also give an extra point on specific subjects so we definitely need to check out which schools are most advantageous.  This entrance system is very complicated so there are a lot of things to consider to figure out which is good for us.  >>correct I'm kind of sad about this situation. >>correct  The view of education in Korean society don't care about students' interest.  >>The view of education in Korean society doesn't care about students' interest.  They are just trying to go to a few good schools. >>correct

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