I went to a presentation about how to apply for un
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I went to a presentation about how to apply for universities. There were whole bunch of people so it was hard to get to sit even I went there two hours before it started. Some people were outside of auditoriums or stnading to listen to. I know it sounds crazy for foreigners. But that is true getting accpeted by a good college in Korea is pretty important. That's why many parents and students so care about getting into those schools. At the presentation, two speaker showed up. First of all, he describes what he did in order to make his students be accepted. However, it was very old story so it doesn't fit with current situation. The other speacker explained that what applicants have to consider before they file their applications.
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Hello [이름],
I hoped you learned a lot of useful stuff at the lecture. Have a great weekend.
-RJ
I went to a presentation about how to apply for universities. >>correct
There were whole bunch of people so it was hard to get to sit even I went there two hours before it started.
>>There was a whole bunch of people so it was hard to get a seat even though I went there two hours before it started.
Some people were outside of auditoriums or stnading to listen to.
>>Some people were outside of the auditoriums and standing to listen.
I know it sounds crazy for foreigners.
>>correct
But that is true getting accpeted by a good college in Korea is pretty important.
>>But that just shows how important it is to get into a good college in Korea.
That's why many parents and students so care about getting into those schools.
>>That's why many parents and students care so much about getting into those schools.
At the presentation, two speaker showed up.
>>At the presentation, two speakers showed up.
First of all, he describes what he did in order to make his students be accepted.
>>The first speaker described what he did in order to make his students be accepted.
However, it was very old story so it doesn't fit with current situation.
>>However, it was a very old story so it doesn't fit with the current situation.
The other speacker explained that what applicants have to consider before they file their applications.
>>The other speaker explained what applicants have to consider before they file their applications.
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