I went to Job World

I went to Job World last Saturday. In the Job World,children can experience firsthand some jobs like reporter,police officer,fire fighter, and flight attendant. I exprienced about reporter. It was little difficult for me the first time,but it wasn't difficult to me. I interviewed my teacher. And I made newspaper,too. It was very exciting. I want to go there again on the other day.

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