I went to Junam wetland

Today, I went to Junam wetland. It is a famous place for birds. There were many birds. There were telescope for the people who watchs birds. I went there from other school with other school kids. We played with sticks and we watched many birds. I hope I can go there again.

Hi [이름]!  Thank you for sharing your experiences with me. I am glad that you had fun today. That is actually good for you to be able to relax. I hope that the next time you go there, you’ll have fun like what you did today.  Connie Today, I went to Junam wetland. >>  Correct It is a famous place for birds. >> Correct There were many birds. >> There are many birds. or >> There were many birds that day. There were telescope for the people who watchs birds. >>  There were also telescopes for the people who watch the birds. I went there from other school with other school kids. >> I went there with some kids from other schools. We played with sticks and we watched many birds. >> Correct I hope I can go there again. >> Correct