I went to the beach at lest weekend
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to the beach at lest weekend that is one of famous beach in here
I am living in island of Korea We called jeju
so it is easy to go beach and many of beach is closed from my house.
but last weekend I didn\'t go to beach for fun or any purpose. I just stopped to get drinking some of soda while I passed there
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Since you mentioned there are many beaches close to your house, it must be beautiful where you live. I envy you that you can see a beautiful sunset every time and smell the sea. However, I do not envy the humid weather kkk~ Thank you for sharing this. I hope you do not just pass by the beach but to actually spend time there. Have a good night. Let\'s talk again tomorrow. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I went to the beach at lest weekend
>>> I went to the beach last weekend.
I went to the beach at lest weekend that is one of famous beach in here
>>> I went to one of the famous beaches here.
I am living in island of Korea We called jeju
>>> I live in an island in Korea called Jeju.
so it is easy to go beach and many of beach is closed from my house.
>>> So it is easy to go to the beach and there are many beaches close to my house.
but last weekend I didn\'t go to beach for fun or any purpose.
>>> But last weekend, I didn\'t go to the beach for fun or any other purpose.
I just stopped to get drinking some of soda while I passed there
>>> I just went to get some drinks like soda while I passed by there.
I went to the beach at lest weekend
>>> I went to the beach last weekend.
I went to the beach at lest weekend that is one of famous beach in here
>>> I went to one of the famous beaches here.
I am living in island of Korea We called jeju
>>> I live in an island in Korea called Jeju.
so it is easy to go beach and many of beach is closed from my house.
>>> So it is easy to go to the beach and there are many beaches close to my house.
but last weekend I didn\'t go to beach for fun or any purpose.
>>> But last weekend, I didn\'t go to the beach for fun or any other purpose.
I just stopped to get drinking some of soda while I passed there
>>> I just went to get some drinks like soda while I passed by there.
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