I went to the mountain

2020-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi! Gabby... I went to the mountain with my husband on last Friday. The mountain is near our house. we often go to the mountain. That has three peaks. We usually go to one peak but go to all peaks in the weekend. Today, we went to the mountain. There had a lunch and walked 3 hours on the mountain. We had some gimbab,instant two noodle,some dumpling for lunch. Today was enjoy,happy and hard a day. According to the weather forecast, it will be raining tomorrow so I will stay at home all day. Have a nice weekend Gabby! From Susan,

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan. Great job for this composition. Please continue learning the English language.

- T. Gabby

Hi! Gabby...
>> Correct
I went to the mountain with my husband on last Friday.

>> I went to the mountain with my husband last Friday.
The mountain is near our house. we often go to the mountain. That has three peaks.

>> The mountain is near our house and we often go there. That mountain has three peaks.
We usually go to one peak but go to all peaks in the weekend.

>> We usually go to one peak only, but we go to all peaks on a weekend.
Today, we went to the mountain.

>> Today, we went to the mountain.
There had a lunch and walked 3 hours on the mountain.

>> We had lunch and we walked for 3 hours going up the mountain.
We had some gimbab,instant two noodle,some dumpling for lunch.

>> We had some gimbab, two instant noodles and dumplings for lunch.
Today was enjoy,happy and hard a day.

>> We really enjoyed today. It was hard but it was a happy day.
According to the weather forecast, it will be raining tomorrow so I will stay at home all day.\\

>> According to the weather forecast, it will rain tomorrow so I will be at home the whole day.
Have a nice weekend Gabby!

>> Correct
From Susan,

>> From Susan.

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