I went to the school

2012-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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I got up early because i went to the school. I washed my face, ate breakfast and took the school uniform. I rode the bus and i met my best friend. My school is in the mountain. So i always walk the hill. When i arrived the school, my school bell is rang. So i ran fast. I always late the school.

강사 첨삭

Mr. [Name], I am so happy to receive your first composition. Thank you for having time to drop by. Anyway, here are my corrections and please always capitalize the word I. T.Sheela I got up early because i went to the school. >> Correct! >> (capitalize the word I)I washed my face, ate breakfast and took the school uniform. >> Correct! >>OR I washed my face, ate breakfast and wore the school uniform.I rode the bus and i met my best friend. >> I rode the bus and met my best friend.My school is in the mountain. >>Correect!So i always walk the hill. >>Correct! >> (capitalize the word I)When i arrived the school, my school bell is rang. >> Once, I arrived the school, my school bell rang. >> (capitalize the word I)So i ran fast. >> Correct! >> (capitalize the word I) I always late the school. >> I am always late at school.

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