I went to the school
학생이 쓴 원문
I got up early because i went to the school.
I washed my face, ate breakfast and took the school uniform.
I rode the bus and i met my best friend.
My school is in the mountain.
So i always walk the hill.
When i arrived the school, my school bell is rang.
So i ran fast.
I always late the school.
강사 첨삭
Mr. [Name],
I am so happy to receive your first composition. Thank you for having time to drop by. Anyway, here are my corrections and please always capitalize the word I.
T.Sheela
I got up early because i went to the school.
>> Correct!
>> (capitalize the word I)I washed my face, ate breakfast and took the school uniform.
>> Correct!
>>OR I washed my face, ate breakfast and wore the school uniform.I rode the bus and i met my best friend.
>> I rode the bus and met my best friend.My school is in the mountain.
>>Correect!So i always walk the hill.
>>Correct!
>> (capitalize the word I)When i arrived the school, my school bell is rang.
>> Once, I arrived the school, my school bell rang.
>> (capitalize the word I)So i ran fast.
>> Correct!
>> (capitalize the word I)
I always late the school.
>> I am always late at school.
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