I will do the worth thing.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear jenny.
I'm happy to meet you again by this letter today. at this time I tried to see Klimt' exhibition last year. the exhibition was being held at the gallery of Seoul city. but I couldn't go to see with several reason. I am interested in printing. when Gogh's exhibition was helding in 2008, I went to see the exhibition. It was impressed experience. Until April 10, Andrew Warhola's exhibition is being held.
I think seeing it in person is worth far more than seeing it on paper. I will try to go Seoul to see the exhibition 2 weeks later. I guess it must be good experience.
강사 첨삭
Dear jenny.I'm happy to meet you again by this letter today.
>>I’m happy to write you a letter again today.
at this time I tried to see Klimt' exhibition last year.
>> I saw Klimt’s exhibition last year.
the exhibition was being held at the gallery of Seoul city. but I couldn't go to see with several reason.
>> The exhibition was held at a gallery in Seoul but I was not able to go for some reasons.
I am interested in printing. when Gogh's exhibition was helding in 2008, I went to see the exhibition.
>> I got interested in paintings when I saw Gogh’s exhibition in 2008.
It was impressed experience. Until April 10, Andrew Warhola's exhibition is being held.
>>It was a very impressive experience. Then on April 10, I will see Warhola’s exhibition.I think seeing it in person is worth far more than seeing it on paper.
>>Correct.
I will try to go Seoul to see the exhibition 2 weeks later.
>> I will try to go to Seoul to see the exhibition 2 weeks later.
I guess it must be good experience.
>> I expect it will be a good experience.
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