I will expect!!!

2021-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Annie

학생이 쓴 원문

My power_english teacher broke it me.... He is my best teacher.. but soon, I will meet my new power_english teacher tonight... I\'m very expect! I know some information..... My new teacher\'s name is Annie.. It is uncertain information but I think maybe this Information will be corrrect. But... I don\'t now well about my new teacher \'Annie\'. Annie will be my second teacher. Umm .. I hope to have great time my first meet with Annie....... I want to learn good english studies with annie. I joined to power english in 2020 February. I will be the good english speaker. I will do my best and litsen hard. I think.... Annie will be my best english teacher... I\'m very expect now.. I want to meet annie quickly!! We will have a great first meet!! Thank you for reading and bye bye~~~~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for writing this essay. I understand if you are sad because you are missing your former teacher, but don\'t worry I promise that I will do my very best to be a good teacher to you as I\'ll help you learn English well. By the way, I like the way you expressed your honest thoughts about me. I hope you\'ll enjoy our class together. See you soon!:)

~T. Annie

My power_english teacher broke it me....
>>My English teacher broke my heart.
He is my best teacher.. but soon, I will meet my new power_english teacher tonight...
>>She is the best teacher, but I will meet my new English teacher tonight.
I\'m very expect! I know some information.....
>>I\'m expecting something from my new teacher as I know some information her.
My new teacher\'s name is Annie..
>>My new teacher\'s name is Annie.
It is uncertain information but I think maybe this
>>It is uncertain information but I think this information might correct.
But... I don\'t now well about my new teacher \'Annie\'. Annie will be my second teacher.
>>I don\'t now well about my new teacher.
Annie will be my second teacher.
>>Annie will be my new teacher.
Umm .. I hope to have great time my first meet with Annie.......
>> I hope to have a great time meeting teacher Annie for the first time.
I want to learn good english studies with annie.
>>I want to learn English well with teacher Annie.
I joined to power english in 2020 February.
>>I joined Power English in February, 2020 .
I will be the good english speaker.
>>I will be a good English speaker.
>>I will do my best and litsen hard.
>>I will do my best to learn and listen well.
I think.... Annie will be my best english teacher
>>I think Annie will be my best English teacher.
I\'m very expect now
>> I\'m very excited now!
I want to meet Annie quickly!!
>>I want to meet Annie soon!!
We will have a great first meet!!
>>We will have a great first class!!
Thank you for reading and bye bye~~~~
>>Thanks for reading. bye!

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