I will explain my travel experience and feeling.

As I use following writing into my portfolio, please check it's grammer and vocabulary uses. Summer vacation in 2002, I traveled in the Western America including 'Monument Valley Navajo Tribal Park’ with my friends. Seeing the enormous Rocks, I was surprising and fabulous in their huge size, unique shape and vestiges of an ancient religion. When I entered and saw the huge Rocks, I shouted “Elephants.” People are usually aware that elephant is very big and gigantic, and I was also impressed by the rocks similar to that animal located in Monument Valley.

[이름], I hope you find these corrections helpful. Xoxo, Jenny   Corrections:  As I use following writing into my portfolio, please check it's grammer and vocabulary uses. >> Please check the vocabulary and grammar in this writing as I would be using them in my portfolio. Summer vacation in 2002, I traveled in the Western America including 'Monument Valley Navajo Tribal Park’ with my friends. >> In Summer of 2002, I traveled in “Monument Valley Navajo Tribal Park” in Western America with my friends. Seeing the enormous Rocks, I was surprising and fabulous in their huge size, unique shape and vestiges of an ancient religion. >> Seeing the enormous rocks, I was surprised and amazed with their huge sizes, unique shapes and even the vestiges of an ancient religion. When I entered and saw the huge Rocks, I shouted “Elephants.” >> When I went inside those huge rocks, I exclaimed, “Elephants”.  People are usually aware that elephant is very big and gigantic, and I was also impressed by the rocks similar to that animal located in Monument Valley. >> People know that elephants are gigantic animals and I was so impressed with those huge rocks like them which were located in the Monument Valley.